after the fact

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one more addition to the poesy category: this, written 06may00. tonight reminded me of it in a way. for obvious reasons, yes, and some not so obvious.

after the fact

i was finding
 existence costly;
i named two
 kittens: widget
   and dweezil.
i waited hours with
 childlike malevolence &
   a sense of
     depletion.
fear was, as
 always, an influence
   on me & these
dubious reasons why i
 was willing &
   followed
& left, variously, with
 these facts, all
   nuanced & inconclusive
& no answers.

kdkelly
06may00

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Very clear, great formatting there. Makes me think of cummings, and I was already in that mood. Poems make me happy.

I tried it and came up with:
shot from THE monitor . my bellybutton with it all
i felt like the
spelling and could
have permanent scars from when the hollow needle
and then got
a trip to use it. makes me
is Some cool old VW bus?
guessing mid ? kind of
pliers.
If there were any good
ideas on certain concepts. Like a
brand new York City I think about mankind? Posted
by and my father if
anybody guess the pilots killed
Canadians!!! selur dnuorgrednu tevlev eht Damn,
another weekend
gone...

oh, that one wasn't generated. i actually wrote that. you know, deliberately.

but the poemgen thingy is great, isn't it? i'm so glad i've got other people posting again. more blogs = more words to randomize = fun.

You mean, when we enter a URL and hit the button, you quickly compose something on the spot and put it on our screen? Damn, you're fast. It only took a couple of seconds.

no the one in the post i meant. not the one in the comment. uh. i'm a little out of it today, so ... um.

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