& it feels awkward unwieldy it stumbles in places & considered excusing this claiming it is uneven by design but i couldn't, isn't. so it's rough, a draft, oddly i did try to keep it quiet tucked away let it settle & breathe in peace. however that just wasn't feasible.
oh yeah one more thing: twenty three years ago? driving down McKee Road in San Jose, on my way home from my night job. you?
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